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Well done!

I can still see some of your animating skills growing exceptionally well, it's a good track! Frankly, I don't overall agree with anything saying this is comical, but more serious, maybe dramatic or realistic. Still, you portray your ideas extremely well on animation, the art was nicely done and so was the music. All in all, it was well played. Sadly, this audience isn't exactly for you but eh, I find little satire in it...

Satire is generally to mock, as there are two kinds. The funny kind of satire, not exactly crossing the line to make the mocked cry. That sort is generally the one you hear from friends or family just kidding around. Then there's the harmful satire, which can be hilarious for anyone that hates what's being mocked.

Yet I found this work not to be very satirical or funny (except in maybe 3 given moments, such as camping and the SPARTAN TV thing.) I found it's mayor impact to be in a critical manner. This looks more like a criticization of Armor Lock than a satire or parody, and not a comedy which was probably what most people were expecting. Of course, it's possible that's because the end even after the credit pulled off a greater impact than the story than the beginning. Seeing the letter and the dark figure in the distance was win on that part.

Still, excellent work man, keep up the good work and don't stop no matter what!

DoomzDayChikn responds:

I appreciate your deep thought and understanding of what I was going for. Its true, everyone is conditioned to immediately think Halo flashes are always supposed to be funny. I added humor in the beginning, but cut it off when the story changed to a more serious tone, but that apparently enrages people.

So you're right, most newgrounds viewers are very narrow minded and ignorant but not you my friend. You're an oasis in the desert for me. Thanks again

Brian-OA Soon to release something epic.

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